I am always looking for criticism, so please offer it! The ratings of poems explain how a poem stands against the others, however, it doesn't help someone with knowing how to improve their poem. Any advice for improvements is something I certainly would accept with open arms.
Expression on Wooded Products Written beauty is so eloquently true Taking letters into meaningful families As my way to release a deep gray-blue By shy metaphors or saddened similes Don't forget those hidden thoughts too Tie them together for higher expression For waking the soul to create sweet creations Small and big ideas sorted with witty words Done quickly or by tactful, subtle elation To make forms of angry lions or graceful birds New muses are silently striking wherever Almost always in the dull, daily scenery Having no red ink makes ideas lost forever Fading and erasing each word's...
More..Christopher Welsch
Member since: September 2009
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