This is the first chapter of my story I am writting. I just wanted some imput on it Ch 1 Survival, is it really worth it to survive. You'll go through more pain if you live to see the next day. Surviving is the only thing I can do. Surviving the sight of a dying child, the pain of a crying mother, the slight movement of a trigger. My job only lets me kill or suffer. Not die but suffer. But the pain they put me through is not the torture. Its living my self. I got out of the car I got out into the cold rainy day with a jacket and a black briefcase. I walk up to the building in front of me a...
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