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Created on: August 25, 2010 Last Updated: December 31, 2011
Snow-berry pond
Virgin skates touch frozen pond
Where dreams extend quite far beyond
The patchy gray and frozen fronds
Of shore-lines, ferny grace.
Homespun woolens, snagged and torn
Bottom wet, and knees quite worn
Her eight-year life began that day...
Spinning, in the womb of this place.
Surrounded by great hawthorn trees
Thorns and berries, bereft of leaves
Hidden in this snugly cove
Free to fall, without shame.
New-found grace upon her gift
Of silver-white skates, a life adrift...
Great swirls and twirls and arms extended
Toward the gray-white sky.
She would be known as: “The Queen of Skating”.
She would be known as: "The Queen of the Ice”!
Now known as: “The Queen of Sorrow"
Alive at a throw of the dice.
.
Her Brother Peter, was neatly hidden
With his new, red-painted Santa sled.
Santa was kind to both; that year
Perhaps he didn’t see what lay ahead?
Scrambling toward the hole in the ice
Paddling - breathless - toward the light
Teeth clenched tight, as he paddled faster...
Dragging Katherine, without a fight.
Peter died that fateful day.
Katherine went on to excel.
She never forgot her brother's face
Beneath his frozen, ice-bound jail.
Now as she lay in the Old-Folks home
Her worn-out skates.... just a remnant on the wall
She peers from the window, at the snow-covered trees
Red-berries, bring an end to it all.
A tale that extends, quite far beyond
What I’ve grown to know, as love, and grace.
This simple story of “Snow-berry pond”...
The clear vision of , a long-ago face.
Who I am, and whom I’ve loved the most
None more dear than my brother long dead.
My skates hang on the wall of the room I now share...
With the tears I'm now able to shed.
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