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Created on: July 17, 2010
Lay All My Love on You
Everyone can see the way I’m feeling
When I look in your eyes
Everybody knows the way I want you
They can see you send me up high.
And standing face to face
This intoxication thrills me
But I can’t tell you what I want
This intoxication kills me.
Want to lay all my love on you
Want to love you the way I do
My heart can’t breathe
Is this my fate? Is this my destiny?
I kiss goodbye to reason
Because there’s only you on my mind
Don’t have to tell me its madness
Baby, just put your lips on mine.
I could spend my life living this dream
But I need more for my soul
You know I’ll do you right
If only you could take control.
Want to lay all my love on you
Want to love you the way I do
My heart can’t breathe
Is this my fate? Is this my destiny?
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