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Created on: June 27, 2010
I sat there and listened to your words,
made a point to understand .
I held out my hand,
within it my heart
and agreed to shake on new plans.
I thought you could see what I was offering,
after all I understood you,
but you turned things around and these offerings,
were no longer about me,
just you.
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