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Created on: April 23, 2010
Beautiful
When I first saw you, it was pure exhilaration.
My heart quivered, at once moved by your sensation.
Just one glance into your pretty brown eyes,
I caught my breath, for in that moment I was mesmerized.
You smiled, and I made only this one evaluation.
My heart had found its wings and my soul its salvation.
Your beauty out-shined the rising of a thousand suns;
And when you spoke I became completely undone.
With tender rhapsody, you had captured me as wave upon the sand.
As a melody that came back to me over and over again.
I tried desperately to recover, but you dissolved my inhibitions.
To know you and possess you became all of my ambition.
Now, here we stand in this chapel as I declare to you my love,
before our cherished family and friends as we vow unto our God:
to walk this life together in loves beauty and its grace,
to share our lives together in a sacred way.
A diamond is forever, so with this ring, I thee wed.
To be a loving, faithful partner is my solemn pledge.
You were beautiful first I saw; albeit nothing can compare
to the diamond you have become whose heart is O so rare.
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