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Created on: March 09, 2010
My message to god ...
Dear god this is my message to you
I just want to tell you what I am going through
You chose which angels to take
And I don't want you to make a mistake
You see, you broke my heart once before
Took all I had and lived for
Now you're threatening to do the same again
But this time I can't live with the pain
I'm not trying to change your mind
Or tell you how to rule our land
I know you have control and power
You hold that key so sought after
You take good people and make them angels
Guide them to heaven and give them wings to fly
Show them a new life
I know we never really die
So you want to take him to heaven above
Take away his hate and make him a symbol of love
But there's so much he wants to do in this world
He has a story that needs to be heard
I know him, his heart and mind
And I know he is one of a kind
I understand why you want to take him away
And it's selfish to ask you to let him stay
But I can't live otherwise
So please god if you're going to take him to be an angel for you
Then please take me too.
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