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Created on: February 15, 2010 Last Updated: September 30, 2010
Sand grains rub against the soles of my feet,
like a thousand diamonds cutting edge; a complimentary pain.
The smell of fresh sea salt smothers my nasal passage,
like an overprotective mother; I've come home.
As i venture out towards the water, ammatures return.
They don't feel the wave, be the wave, like i do.
Me and the sea go together like oxygen to lungs.
Without the sea, i am nothing, I'm dead.
Cold, fresh, blue liquid arrouses my feet.
I take a deep breathe and praise the picturesque views.
Me and my board swim out to the deep waters.
I am not afraid, the sea and i become one.
I sit and wait for the perfect set.
Paddling rapidly ready for the drop.
Im in; above the curve seduces me.
A turn with the wave, glide together.
I look through the tube to the end.
I dont want to leave.
My heart pounds, breathing increasing.
Head rush occurs, pressure building.
It's as if me and my wave are making love.
The feeling; oh what a feeling...
Finally, the tube comes to an end.
The great orgasm as i reach my goal
We did it again; perfection.
Me and the wave...We become one...
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