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Created on: January 18, 2010
Snow, Ice, and a Shattered Mind
It’s tearing down
As the angels of snow choir sing
The heaven’s gate is opening
Send down life and watery thing
Crystal forms
Shiny, glowing blue
Falling down with clear ice stones
Bring in cold and disaster
Sleet
has frosted my heart and my mind
Me who is now staring out of the window
Wondering if the heavenly clouds
want to chill out my flaming passion
and my burning anger
into dust and ashes
by its diamond dust
Wonder if He really knows my deep feeling?
For the sleet won’t stop falling,
crashing
destructing
Is it a form of my shattered mind?
or just another kind of winter blow ?
Me is now still staring out of the window
waiting for the snow storm to stop
But it just won’t stop
The diamond dust
Form of my shattered mind
I see what you can not see
Sleet
which is now falling out there,
is destructing
more....
and more...
but you can not see
no, you can not see
It’s only me , the snow, and the ice
and the shattered mind of mine....
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