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Created on: January 11, 2010
ADDICTION:
falling in love with you was like an addiction
my sentence. oh my sweet conviction
.
loving you was like the sweet air i breath
crisp in energy tastes too sweet
.
loving you was like a time bomb gone ticking
each second in contrast with the clicking
.
loving you was like being alive
i did not for one second feel as if deprived
.
loving you was like the angry caged mouse
trapped inside of my temple, my house.
.
loving you was like living in the far past
every secong we spent went by much too fast
.
loving you was the good and the bad
loving you made me happy made me sad
.
but in the end i look back and i smile
and you don't know it yet but you are the father of my child
.
because loving you was all i had left
but you left me and now im a mess
.
loving you. i guess you could say.
i just wished that this love wasn't laced with this pain
.
loving you. was worth every minute.
but i love you.
so i'll let you leave.
but i love you.
just promise you'll come back to me.
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Poetry: Loving you
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Your green eyes smother and intoxicate my mind,
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