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Created on: January 10, 2010
Love.:
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this love was so sweet
young in age and so weak
.
before i had not a need to write
for writing was when i was sad
and as long as i held him in my arms for the night
the world didn't seem so bad
.
yet i can still remember his scent
his two colored eyes
his skin almost floresent
the image sets me to cry
.
i remember the first kiss
so bright and full of bliss
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i remember the last kiss
desperate. i never wanted to let go of it
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it was christmas when you left
you took a part of me and left the rest a mess
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i fell in love.
i fell in love.
i fell in love.
.
i remember the movements
the smallest of words.
i remember the scenery the flew over our heads
i remember laying, crying in bed.
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i hope you fell in love with your city
my young love.
you hurt me so much.
.
because you were the whole purpose for everything.
you are my everything.
and you disrupted the balance.
and you left.
and you left.
and you left.
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