by Patrika Vaughn

Created on: November 12, 2009

Wondering why editors and publishers are saying no? Discover the seven writing problems that keep books from being publishable in the diagnostic tape, Why Your Writing Isn't Working and What to Do About It. Once you've identified your writing problem, move on to a week long seminar-in-a-box, The Writer's Tool Box, which covers these problems in depth and gives examples and exercises for correcting them Look at the following excerpt:

"The Hookless Beginning: In writing fiction, your opening should accomplish three things:

1)establish the scene

2) introduce the main character

3)let readers know what the character wants or needs - what the character will be reaching and struggling for that determines the action and direction of your story. If you're writing non-fiction much the same applies.

Your beginning should be as clear, concise and straightforward as possible and it will still have to accomplish the three things that fiction must do:

1) it needs to establish the scene, but in this case instead of creating a fictitious scene your job is to report the scene - to ground readers immediately so they'll know the who/what/why/when/where of what you're writing about.

2) non-fiction often has a main character, a protagonist who will be featured in your work. As with fiction, you'll want to introduce this person early on. That introductory hook you need could well be an image of your protagonist at some dramatic moment. It could be: a president being sworn in a prospector discovering a big vein of gold a scientist receiving the Nobel Prize a woman giving birth a man dying a lost child finding its home

3) such an image is an excellent way to start a story that will be about the protagonist's long hard struggle to the point of success. There are essentially eight different types of openings for either fiction or non-fiction.

The first of these is the SUGGESTIVE SETTING:

If you'll be working with a setting that lends itself to a vivid opener, start with a description of it. This will set the tone and mood of your work and give readers an immediate mental picture to get involved with: It is still dark outside her window. But she has been unable to sleep. Her fear is now a continual inner roar. "I don't want to die," she thinks. She cannot see the flag outside, drooping in the dark, but she knows it is inscribed, "Central Vermont Medical Center." She knows every detail of the view from her window, every item in her room.... Does this sound like an interesting fictional

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