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Created on: November 07, 2009
The lightning struck loudly this time,
I looked outside and searched for the strokes of thunder,
Tears of agony strolled down my cheeks,
As I sat there, the only thing i had left was myself,
but i couldn't pull myself together
That was when my back was struck,
I was struck
my heart fell and shattered to a million pieces
The pain built up inside of me but all this time,
I realized that i was walking on broken glass
I was incomplete...
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