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Created on: October 28, 2009
Destiny Personified
Carlos Alberto Jaramillo, charming, muse-like sprite
Like the whiff of sulfur contained by a match you hold your fire in so tight
As I have only seen within me-that drive I know I cannot fight
CJ, sharing your career's vision so very motivated and proud
Like a sudden burst of water from a laden cloud
Unknowingly giving me a glimpse of an achievable horizon from which I had cowed
Boss Man, offering opportunity as though it flows for you like some stream
Like the revival of an elusive image from my eyes a hopeful gleam
And treated my work like it was a favor for you as "thank YOU," I, all but, scream
Carlos, accepting friendship I hid behind that false dichotomy's glow
Like the welcome end to a bad reality show
You reminded me of true camaraderie's reciprocity with each lift of your brow
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