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Life Love and Backstabbers
A story I'm writing, this excerpt is from chapter 3.
Carnell's P.O.V.
I got off the phone with Chenille, its been a couple of hours, my friends are probably thinking, where am I at. It's not to dark, it's about seven, fifteen and I can still see the sunlight from it setting breaking through the window's curtains down the hall. I glazed out the window, my mind going to Chenille, I feel a strong connection between us. I feel like this girl could be someone special. I decided to go for a walk, to get some fresh air and think. I had to make sure, that if I wanted to have a series, relationship with Chenille I was going to be certain that, I wouldn't let past relationships get in my way. I was going to be positive and guarantee myself that, this would be different, that nothing else would matter, but me and her. I briskly walked out down the hall, and out of the building, if I made CPA I would be able to stay at the CPA Alpha Psi house. I began to stride, along the sidewalk, strolling at a steady pace. I brushed past some leaves and sticks on the sidewalk, making a crunch sound. I didn't have anywhere in particular to go, I just had gotten this rush of energy from talking to Chenille.
Time, flew by fast, I ended up walking by the girls soro house: BIS Alpha Phi. I had walked a ways , down from where, I stay. As I observed my surroundings, someone caught my eye, this girl, she looked vaguely familiar. I inched closer, having to go up the steps toward the soro house, so I could see this girls face. It was Natasha and she was hugged up and kissing on some guy, and I was confident that he was not Dustin. Man! The same thing, she did to me, she done did to Dustin. He's going to be hurt, but I remember I tried to tell him how she was, even Marcel, and Miki her own best friend. I guess by him being new to are group he didn't believe us, I have not the slightest clue why, I mean why would all three of us lie about something like that. He'll see now, or matter of fact, he probably won't believe me.
I looked deeper, hoping they wouldn't notice me, I don't really see how they could because, they're so up in each others faces. I tried my hardest to figure out who the guy was. As I looked harder, I almost fell, leaning in to far. I walked over to the right, going all the way up the steps, to try and get a side view. When I got to the side, I knew instantly who they guy was, Treyshawn. I shook my head, even if I told Dustin, and he didn't believe
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