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Created on: September 02, 2009
I woke this morning,
My heart racing.
I ran out side,
To stare up to the sky.
I saw the star filled sky,
with the sun on the rise.
I remember what you told me,
all those years ago.
You passed away,
All those years ago.
You left me with words,
That would always stay with me.
you had said with scaping breaths,
That if I truly believe in love.
You would fall out from the sky,
If I still loved you.
You would come back to me,
On a star filled sky,
with the sun on the rise.
I stared out to the star filled sky,
The sun was rising.
My Heart beat harder,
Tears fell from my eyes.
I stared at a star,
Growing ever Brighter upon my eye.
My Heart pounded with a devils fury,
The Purest of lights descended upon me.
You Fell from the sky,
just like you Promised all those years ago.
Your Heart gave way to come again,
for a love to last longer than mortals stand.
You Fell from the sky,
and wrapped me up in your love.
Your Heart held the purest of love,
for you came back like you promised.
My Heart beated harder and harder,
with your descent.
You wrapped around me,
Your warm arms around me again.
My heart slowed as you held me,
slower and slower till I became light headed.
You were taking me away,
To the star filled sky.
My breath left my body,
I struggled for air.
You held me tight,
You comforted me.
I gave up the mortal realm,
I let go for you.
You gave up the moral realm,
You let go for me.
I closed my eyes and let go,
You held me close.
I felt different but,
Your embrace never changed.
We looked down,
My body on the ground.
In a peaceful rest,
with a smile across my face.
We looked at each other,
We knew what we wanted.
We kissed and slowly rose,
We lifted in a great pure white light.
We gave up the mortal realm,
We left it all for each other.
We left it all for each other,
So we could find Eternity.
You Kept your promise,
You came to me when on my hearts last beats.
On that Star filled sky,
With the sun on the rise.
Our love true,
our promises unbreakable.
We left it all so we could,
Find our eternal love.
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