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Created on: August 30, 2009
"Retiremental"
Ever since I was a boy
down 'til now
I have been a builder.
On the shore, fortressed sand castles
with sugar cone turrets.
Atop my paperweighted desk
appointment booked hurdles
holding back the tide.
Doing this and that.
The Boy and the Man
always busy building.
LIke the tide, susbstance
passes in a moment.
Building is behind me
and the Labor Day weekend
and the sea grass,
bent by off-shore winds
point the way Home.
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