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Created on: July 29, 2009
Falling through gray clouds, spiraling towards my stark reality
It is hard to fathom the reason for breath, the reason to live when you yearn to die
When colors of beauty fade to dismal grays and black, like the earliest days of memory
Before the pain, before the disappearance of sweet sunshine, before the hope was lost in the sands of time
taking final gasps of air, hoping to inhale some final words of wisdom before the hourglass runs out
hair tangles, no more hairbrush
eyes close for goodbye, there is no more strenth or will to capture visual beauty
summer is gone, embrace your silent winter
all alone as silver snow gently envelops your frozen body
no one left to preserve primitive warmth
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