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Created on: July 13, 2009
It started with "I do"
It started with I do,
This thing between me and you..
This thing more than love,
A commitment..
To love each other forever..
It was beautiful, really going well,
but after a few months it turned into hell..
We'd argue and argue until one of us stormed out,
And each of us wearing a pout.
Love turned to hate so quickly,
I thought this was going so good..
But now when i come home there's blood..
from my anger and my short temper..
I do something I'll always remember
I took you down to the woods,
where you couldn't come home,
and left you, nothing but scared and alone.
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