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Created on: July 06, 2009
"Magnificent"
I built you up to be so good
and then the moment passes.
I feel nothing.
What happened to the laughs and tears?
The smiles and cheers?
I hate that now I feel nothing.
Neutral and fighting it.
I want to be more-
-to feel more.
But I am held back.
A force that hurts
stabs
bleeds
in a place that I did not know existed.
No other word but odd
(at this time)
can explain the silence.
I feel left out.
I feel ignored.
I feel our unspoken promises have been broken.
So certain.
It's cracked.
So certain.
It will fall.
So certain.
It will soon be over.
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