by Gerald Drueppel

Created on: April 30, 2009

Critique

laughable, graspable

steeply inclined, bottom lines

deeply entwined, neatly signed

by royal riffraff

making splish-splashes

taking lip, whip lashes

painful cane bashes

to empty heads

after a century of said, to and fro

a new fandango

impossibly arrives

quite saucily survives

shifty litmus test

in nifty Christmas best

hit me, if it was less

obvious, than merely taking tabs
nearly re-breaking fads

already broken records

risking token filled lectures
on ill spoken conjectures

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