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Created on: March 26, 2009
You cant give up now
Oh my God
What happened?
I see that you have fallen into a dreadful slump
My brother , you can't give up
So what you made an mistake
Get up from there and live
You can't give up
There is more life in store for you
Breathe my brother and drink this water
You are my closet friend and only brother
God will forgive you, and so will I
Come over here brother and let me wipe your stained eyes
You can't give up
Mother and Dad will be so sad
You are the only son that they ever had
Breathe , my brother
Embrace life again
Open your eyes
Say something
You can't give up
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