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There are a few points in fiction writing that have puzzled and caught the curious minds of writers everywhere. One such point may be a character's thoughts, which are no more difficult than dialogue. Thoughts of your characters are simply written in a different fashion.

The first step in writing a character's thoughts is to first think of what thoughts are. They are personal comments on life, sometimes secretive, other times insulting. Thoughts are an individuals narration of life and the world around them. They are, essentially, pieces of dialogue that are not spoken nor directed to any person in particular. To write them is to only change the 'he said' to a 'he thought' and so on.

Some tips to remember, however, are that thoughts are not dialogue, and yet they are at the same time.

Your character's thinking can be so much more personal that his own dialogue. He may say one thing, and think something entirely different, therefore letting the reader in on his real feelings. It may also hint to even more mystery, more intrigue, and therefore more curiosity in the heart of the reader. What he thinks contrasts what he says, very well.

A usually quiet character whom speaks very little may become the most fascinating character in your novel when you develop his thoughts and introduce them to your readers.

Fans of a certain character will find it a treat to hear more of your character's thoughts.

Do not forget that thoughts are not without their images, as well. When people think, it is not uncommon for their body to move in sync with their emotions, verbal or otherwise. When they are sad their face will appear drawn, when they are angry they will tense. Try speaking your characters thoughts out loud, much as you would do for an acting audition. Try to get truly dramatic, then mirror your own actions and facial expressions in your novel. Remember to tone them down a bit, unless your character gesticulates heavily.

For some help, fetch yourself a hand held mirror. These come in handy for any writer. Hold it in front of you and begin to think of things that make you angry, sad, happy, confused. Watch your own expressions and take notes. Look at other people's expressions as well and try to read them, especially when they are not speaking.

Don't forget your character may get lost in their own thoughts. Let their minds wonder, let them get distracted, and have fun with them being shaken back into reality by an ignored party.

Another good way to express thoughts could be in your character's diary. For an exercise, write a few journal entries, POV your character, on some momentous events in their life, as well as normal days and reflections of days in your novel. Have them write poetry, songs, or letters. Not all thoughts are mental, some can be in the written word.

The most important part is to understand that each writer will possess their own style in which to work not only thoughts, but other elements of writing as well. Feel free to experiment with different situations and characters.

There is no right way to write a novel. There never will be. No two authors have ever, nor will they ever, be the same. That is why finding your own voice, and unique talent, is so important.

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