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Created on: February 18, 2009 Last Updated: May 28, 2009
Screeching wheels
Race along
Cold steel tracks
Anxious people
Lean against walls
Listening to beats
Craning necks
Peering down dark tunnels
Waiting for the subway.
Tired drab green tiles
Cast florescent shadows
On weary faces
Of riders wanting to go
Home
School
Work
Throngs of commuters
Stand alone
Reading slim urban papers
Horoscopes
Sudoku
Gossip
And
Sports.
Cells ring
Texts ding
Squealing sounds
Trains
Echo
Drawing nearer
Commuters
Not to be left behind
Move like one
The subway stops
Doors whisper open
People push
The platform empties...
Silence.
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Poetry: Subway commute
by Lisa Kates
Screeching wheels
Race along
Cold steel tracks
Anxious people
Lean against walls
Listening to beats
Craning necks
Sounds and signals, speed and noise,
Adverts on a subway wall,
People's faces gray and ashen,
Do they see my face at all?
All
by Tom Glover
Space full of fuss
A train full of people
A tube full of trains
Welcome aboard as commuters take aim
Barge past the hump
by Angela Kanel
Rolling down a stream of concrete
the hypnotism of broken lines pointing into forever
it seems an eternal road
all the vehicles
URBAN UNDERGROUND
Are you looking up at me
Just let your minds eye run free
Every time you join me down here
is the air above
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