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Created on: February 10, 2009
Hollow Man.
Watch me strut my
Stuff, pirouetting so
Prettily down a
Street that doesn't matter.
Watch me 'til I reach the corner...
Then I fade into the
Corners of your short-term
Memory.
No staying power, this
Hollow man that has no
Substance.
Just like the movies,
What I coat myself with
Is who I am to the world.
And I am empty.
I am hollow.
This faade is so fragile
And constricting I can't breathe.
But that's not a problem for
A man who isn't there.
That's not a problem for a man
Who is empty.
Won't you watch me a little more?
Give me shape and form;
A reason to exist,
Lest this fragile tree make no sound
When it falls in the midst of this
Concrete forest...
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