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Fiction-writing: Using backstory to enhance character and plot

by Ms. Glenda Bell

Created on: February 03, 2009   Last Updated: February 23, 2009

In writing any story, we first need to gain the readers attention.The best way to do this is using a backstory. A backstory is a way to set the story in motion, by telling what led up to it. This is a very crucial stage in writing, as it is vitally important to hold the readers attention. One way to do this is to start the narrative where the backstory starts. Take as much time as you need to introduce your characters and explain his/her life circumstances, and the background of the story. Then introduce the crisis, or plot.

In using a backstory, we can explain why the main character is so important, or how they got into a given situation. Be it, an unwanted pregnancy, a prison term, a child custody battle, or what ever your plot may be. The reader needs to be invested in what they are reading. They need to know if the character gets what he/she wants. If the marriage takes place or the groom, leaves the bride at the altar. They will want to know if the person dies of cancer or finds a cure.

You can tell where the character lives, works, or anything you feel the readers need to know. They need to know what led up to the situation and why it is so devastating or exciting to the character. You can take this time to explain, why or how the crisis or conflict affect the character. This doesn't apply in all situations, as we don't need to explain why the hero or heroin needs to escape a burning car, or open their parachute. The reader needs to understand why, this story is so important to tell.

Just tell enough about your character to make the reader care and want to get to know her more. Make the reader care what happens to her.

Sure the readers want to jump right into the action, BUT.....first they need to know who the characters are and why they are where they are. Therefore, the backstory can be the "make or break" of a novel or story. It can draw the reader in and make them feel part of what is happening. This will ensure that they continue reading, to see if the problems are solved in the way they hoped or end in tragedy.

As stated earlier,starting the narrative where the backstory starts, you have the ability to bring the reader into the story immediately. Readers want to launch into action. They want to see things happen. You can do this, start your story with the dramatic question of the story i.e. the conflict or crisis. But, your character doesn't need to go on an on about the problem, even though it is what led them to where they are now.

Here are 5 ways to provide a backstory: 1. Use flashbacks of the characters life 2. Inter-weave those flashbacks into the current situation. 3. Use Current dialogue. 4. Remember you can begin with it. 5. Any or all of the above. The best solution is in your own abilities.

Take time to think things through. Ask yourself what draws you into a story the most. Use your own reading ability to help you with your writing.

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