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Created on: January 23, 2009
I drive ten miles
Across country roads
To a small empty house
Many memories it holds
See, I'm going to see my dad
It's cancer he has inside
Every day is more important
Every minute of the ride
I arrive and there he is
Outside upon his feet
I jump out of the car
"Hey boy!" was his greet
He's feeding all the birds
That's his hobby
Gives him peace
Like the cars he had to have
The Torino, the Caprice
It's great to see him moving
And it's really hard to tell
A stranger wouldn't know today
That he wasn't very well
So we go in for some coffee
Talk of fishing at the pond
Him and his old fly-rod
Of the bluegills he was fond
Says he's going to an auction
A few coins he'd like to buy
Add a few to his collection
If the prices aren't too high
We talk a little longer
And he asks if I can go
Says I could ride with him and his friend Sid
Said I can't, I need to mow
Off he goes in his little red truck
Pick up his friend along the way
They'll joke and laugh as old friends do
See, Dad's having.......a good day
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Poetry: A good day
by Mark Brazel
I drive ten miles
Across country roads
To a small empty house
Many memories it holds
See, I'm going to see my dad
It's cancer
Today was a good day
I talked to Sister Jan
I hadn't heard her voice in months
I wished her happy birthday
She thanked me for
A good day to ride around
The wind can blow my hair
The sun can warm my very soul
And tan my skin so brown
My friends can wonder
Today of all days
the sun came out
so I got the urge
to run all about
To scratch that itch
I get on sunny days
to go outside
Have you ever had a day when it was so quiet and perfect that you could feel God through you? Have you ever had a day when
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