Home > Creative Writing > Short Stories
Created on: January 13, 2009
"I owe you a beer, bro."
One of the first things I noticed about Afghanistan was the terrain; in particular the numerous mountain chains which loomed over the populated areas like silent sentries. There was a permanent air of austere beauty within the barren mountains. They sat in defiance against the summer sun and winds, which baked the lowlands and swept them with the detritus which blew up from dusty settlements. In the winter they adorned themselves with the shiny white coats only the tallest peaks shivered under during the warmer months. I chuckled quietly to myself as I drank in the sharp clean air sitting atop one of those large, dark precipices which overlooked a dank valley below me. It seemed one hell of a contrast: the pretty shores of Auckland and a Taliban controlled sliver of Afghanistan thousands of miles away.
"Hell of a view, eh, Smithie?" a bearded and bushy haired face poking its' way towards me whispered. I nodded my reply as he crept closer to my position and noticed him carefully carrying a mug of tea, which steamed softly in the crisp morning air.
"Cheers, bro." I whispered as he handed it to me.
"No worries, mate." he replied with a grin and lift of the eyebrows.
It was customary amongst New Zealanders, and Australians, to refer to each other as mate. The "bro" reference was common amongst the indigenous Maori people in New Zealand, but the courtesy was afforded to us white-boys too, in their presence. Once we got to know each other, we white-boys could flick the moniker back. Sonny, my Maori colleague, nodded in the direction of a small village which was isolated in the bottom of the valley. I shook my head, sipped my tea and quietly filled him in on the last few hours, as signs of life ricocheted as echoes out of the village and off the mountain walls.
Sheltering in the leeward side of a group of seriously steep hills, we'd set up shop in a strong defendable position which also afforded a quick exit if the proverbial hit the fan. I looked behind me to where the rest of the patrol was lying up. It was an unusual nine man team on this occasion. There were five of us Kiwi's, including an SAS officer who was in overall charge of the patrol, three American Navy SEALS and a CIA spook who was along to visual ID a Taliban big-wig we'd been tracking. By all accounts the big-wig was a nasty individual who enjoyed bullying and threatening the local inhabitants and a key player in the region. He remained allusive and our chance to snag him, or
Below are the top articles rated and ranked by Helium members on:
Short stories: War in Afghanistan
by Nathan Hook
"I owe you a beer, bro."
One of the first things I noticed about Afghanistan was the terrain; in particular the numerous
The hills below flash by, but the pilot was beyond noticing. The jet closed in on its target; the whistling of the wind
Sergeant Nick Aldrete, Christian first and soldier second, was thankful that God's special grace had stayed withhim in Afghanistan
by xe
They call it training. It is named Sand Scorpian. We embark in our HumVee's knowing it is not real. Then, suddenly, it gets
Her phone went off. It wasn't a call, it was a text. Cecilia ran to the idle computer in the blue room. She needed to hook
View All Articles on: Short stories: War in Afghanistan
Featured Partner
Text and Academic Authors Association
The Text and Academic Authors Association (TAA) is the only authoring association devoted exclusively to serving textbook and academic authors. TAA was established in 1987 for those interested in developing and publishing educational...more