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Created on: December 02, 2008
THIS SONG IS UNFINISHED BUT WOULD LOVE SOME FEEDBACK TO EE HOW I COULD IMPROVE IT
(verse 1)
I've told you before and i'll tell you again. You're still my best friend like you've always been.
And i don't want to but one day i might have to let it end. Coz not all things are made to make a mend.
And love can't always over rule the pain. I just told you yet im tellin you again.
I love you but if i had to choose i would choose music. I know you know it so don't try abuse it.
You know that's my weakness so don't go and use it. Coz i love the music like i love you so dont do it.
Now you've left me askin those life questions. Its hard to understand and its harder to mention.
Our life line has been drawn to the last dimension. You got my weighin up my options askin myself questions.
(hook)
You stick to your side i'll stick to mine.
You go left and I'll go right.
You go up and i'll go down.
You stand still while i run around
(chorus)
Should I just give up the fight? Am I willing to give it a try?
Should I just let our love die? I dont know i cant make up my mind.
I cant promise I'll stay by your side. I cant say I'll come home at night.
I cant say i'll give you my life. Help me decide.
(verse 2)
I guess i need your help or maybe i need somebody else. I've looked into you maybe i should look into myself.
We've looked at the future ball and looked at wealth. We've looked at our bodies but what about our hearts health.
I don't even know if im capable of love. And if i can i dont think im capable of enough.
They say love comes easy but i always find it tough. I've loved in the past but i think i loved too much.
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