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Created on: November 27, 2008
Rolling down a stream of concrete
the hypnotism of broken lines pointing into forever
it seems an eternal road
all the vehicles floating close
the earth beneath rushing quickly into past
a networking of concrete arteries
carrying vessels of plastic and steel
carriers of precious contents
flowing along smoothly
never reaching a final destination
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the hypnotism of broken lines pointing into forever
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