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Created on: October 25, 2008
The Earth's candle use to light up the space in between us,
We were surrounded by flowers,
Laughing together for hours.
Suddenly, darkness fell upon my eyes as I discovered,
That you actually have a girl,
And the hope of having you was lost.
Only friends we always have been,
But the bond felt so strong,
Now when I look at you,
I fear that what I might say or do may be wrong.
Distance clutches us, pulling us apart,
While your handsome face, I sculptured.
This piece, I won't share with you,
For the fear of completely losing you.
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