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Created on: September 30, 2008
I was standing in a valley not to long ago
Holding in my hand; I had nothing to show
My life was in shambles; my health not so great
I thought to myself; this must be fate
I looked all around; nothing seemed to be real
Wondering what its like to really, really feel
My life is a disaster; I thought to myself
Looking at the history; I put my life on a shelf
Searching for an answer everyday and night
I never thought to look toward the heavenly light
A stranger grabbed my hand and asked if I would go
I said I'm not sure; I really don't know
He said if your after fulfillment in your life
Getiing rid of pain, restlessness and strife
He exclaimed, come go with me
I know about a tree
It shines down from heaven; amazing I must say
Jesus wants you to choose whom you will serve this day
Your life has been hard; he described it to me
Before he was done I realized I could see
I saw all the glory shining from his face
He said you better stay on a straight and narrow pace
Amazing feelings were blasting inside of me
I knew for sure this must have been the tree the stranger described to me
I accepted with a tear running down my face
And knew; nothing else in life, I wouldn't have to chase
He told me its all over; the hurt and the pain
We all have to go through lifes pouring rain
He was so amazing; his love was running through me
I knew all along this was definitely the tree
The tree of life is standing knocking at our door
Waiting for the troubled, hurting and more
He waits for trials and shows up on time everyday
My God your amazing; what else can I say
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