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Created on: August 27, 2008
I was you once,
I wanted it off.
At least 20 pounds, and then 10 more
I was you once,
I hated that mirror.
I was too big; I was much too big...
I was you once,
They said I was skinny.
They didn't have to lie; they didn't have to lie for me...
I was you once,
I threw it all away.
I would not eat it; I refused to eat it...
I felt huge. I looked huge. I was huge...
There is nothing now,
But it was always just me.
I was always alone; I'll always be alone...
I don't do much now,
I lie still and alone.
I am a teenager forever, I'll be a teenager forever...
I am here now,
I rest in this stale place.
I was young; I was so very young...
I am all bones now.
I am finally thin enough.
I lie here forever; I'll be here forever...
They cry for me. They miss me. They don't understand...
But you understand.
You are like I was.
The next stale place can be yours; the next place is yours...
I was you once.
Will you be me?
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