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Created on: August 21, 2008
The way you treat me
You run your fingers through my hair
I look up from the warm cocoon of your loving arms
and see the desire in your eyes.
You treat me like a dainty flower
holding me so daintily.
The warmth of your eyes match
the warmth of your burning touch
I'm on fire for you
you treat me like fine glazed pottery
afraid to break me
but I'm already broken for you
my legs quiver as I rise
to meet your burning desire.
You treat me like I want to be treated, then
you fall asleep in the loving nest of my hair
but I don't care, I fall asleep too with my
thoughts of how well you treat me.
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Poetry: The way you treat me
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HUMBLE PIE
Just because I love you, doesn't mean I won't walk away.
I don't have to take this from you each and every day.
One
I’ve never known anyone,
Who has treated me as good as you,
Who opens doors for me,
Like it’s the thing to do.
I know you're mad,
but don't treat me bad.
I'm trying to be strong,
so don't do me wrong.
On my face will be a frown,
whenever
You Treat Me
I don't have to wonder if you love me
or even if you care because of the way
You Treat Me.
When I look in your
by Mary Tilley
The way you treat me
You run your fingers through my hair
I look up from the warm cocoon of your loving arms
and see the desire
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