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Created on: August 19, 2008
Nothing compares to the way I feel, when I look at you.
All over so beautiful, angelic it's true.
You walk with a poise, so shockingly strong,
I'm left without air, as you walk along.
It's harder to breathe when you draw near,
I'm left gasping for breath, when you whisper in my ear.
No air is left, I am dying to breathe,
But yet I am fine, you are all that I need.
No poet can write of this breathless sensation,
No songs can sing, of our relations.
I need not a breath, while you are close,
Because I realize it's you I need most.
The beauty of all, compared next to you,
Is nothing but dull, gray and confused.
You inspire the life, that I am living.
But yet you are taking it, because I'm not breathing.
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