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Created on: August 04, 2008
In the Beginning God created man. It was His will that man serve and praise Him wholeheartedly and without question in exchange for paradise. One day man sinned against God's will by eating from the Tree of Knowledge and thus becam a free thnkr. God was angry and sent man out into the world to work hard and die. Bcuz of sin man suffers. There are diseases,crime, poverty, painful childbirth, and even death because of sin.
FAST FORWARD A FEW CENTURIES...
IF THERE WAS NO SUCH THING AS SIN
1. In theory, Many of us would never be alive because there'd be no pre-marital sex and illigetimate babies.
2. Any and all secular music forms such as Rap, Jazz, pop, R&B, etc. would never exist.
3. Fashion and style would never be around bcuz we'd all be naked and not know it.
4. There'd be no need 4 college. The only thing we would (or could) think about is God and love.
5 .There'd be no doctors. No one would get sick.
6. There'd be no presidents (Sorry Mr. Obama. Theory 1 ruled you out already anyway), lawyers, king/queens bcuz we'd have no need for laws.
7. There may be sports but no one would care about winning so there'd be no NBA, NFL, NBL, etc. (Sorry Kobe. No rings for u!)
8. There'd be no fat people. (Think about that one on your own)
9. There would only be one language.
10. Technology like cars, plastic, internet, and cellphones may or may not have been created. (sorry facebook and myspace developers)
11. We'd never have anything 2 want, work 4, or dream about because everything would be perfect.
People tell me all the time I think too much. They could b right. Ignorance is bliss (?)
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