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Created on: May 30, 2008
When I read your letters
I can hear your voice.
Softly it whispers your words to me.
I close my eyes as I listen to you gently,
Take me away to a magical place.
I surrender to the thought of you completely.
I see you standing there.
The wind weaving gently through your hair,
Like the tender touch of a lovers hand.
Your eyes, oh how they sparkle with magic and passion.
Your smile so filled with warmth and love.
The evening breeze, warm and soothing,
Gently rustles the leaves.
It softly whispers to them the passion that draws us together.
You move towards me, as if gliding on that very breeze.
So full of grace you come to me.
Arms outstretched you wrap around me your warmth.
Our lips drawn towards each other,
Pulled by a force that cannot be denied.
The kiss, an eternity of ecstasy. Pure in its passion,
Pure in its desire, pure in its love.
I that moment, that eternity, I feel you.
Our hearts begin go beat as one,
As we fill each other with our breath.
Our bodies entwined, in that moment of purest, eternal ecstasy.
Our souls melt into each other.
We become one.
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