Home > Creative Writing > Reflections
Created on: April 27, 2008
Memories
Mum's piercing blue eyes stared back at me. Her face crinkled with laughter. She loved to have fun and she was really having a good time, in fact she looked a bit tipsy, probably was as her champagne glass was almost empty. She was wearing her favourite party dress - black satin, body hugging, clinging to her every curve, and that string of black pearls Dad have given to her for her fortieth birthday. She was a wild one that was for sure. I could hear the music playing in the background and the hubbub of other party goers. A tear splattered onto the photo breaking my trance. The eerie stillness enveloped me. A cold shiver ran down my spine. Another tear fell. My feet ached.
I had been searching through the rubble for over four hours now. They were gone. I'd found Mum lying sprawled under the chandelier, splinters of glass piercing every piece of her bare skin. Her head cocked awkwardly to the side. A line of blood from the corner of her half open mouth. She was still smiling.
I couldn't find Dad. He would have been in the study at the time, across the hall from Mum or what used to be the hall. He must have been sucked right out of his chair. He could be miles away now. I couldn't even distinguish what was the study apart from the red leather couch with the buttons. Dad loved that couch. He'd lie on it shifting through his case notes. Sometimes, when Mum was out, he'd stretch out on the couch with a whiskey in one hand and a cigar in the other. Silly, silly the things you remembered. When I was little he'd prop me on the red couch and read to me. I'd swing my legs back and forth and listen till I fell asleep. I'd never hear another story from him again!
I sat among the pile of matchsticks, once our home. Uprooted trees lay where our living room used to rest. The thick velvet drapes ripped to shreds by branches and furniture. Books strewn around. Grandmother's antique vase shattered. An upturned coffee cup. Paintings in broken frames. Chair legs snapped. The stillness continued. I realised that all I had left of my family now where these photos.
Then I heard a scratching sound from behind the overturned sofa. There it was again. Then what sounded like a muffled baby's cry. The scratching became more insistent. I tucked the remnants of my family into my sweatshirt pocket and walked towards the sound. I looked behind the now weather-beaten sofa, that used to be the focal point for family drinks, and two green eyes peered back at me. The eyes were filled with fear.
"Chidles! How could I have forgotten you?" I put my hand out to my furry friend and he nuzzled against it, purring in greeting. I picked him up and let the tears flow.
The end
Learn more about this author, Lizz Mceneaney.
Click here to send this author comments or questions.
Below are the top articles rated and ranked by Helium members on:
Reflections: Memories
by Lisa Termin
Letter to a Single Father from his grown Little Girl:
Dearest Daddy,
Thank you for always providing for us. I know
Whispers drifted from the ocean, gently lulling my mind into a state of comfort. Home. The word shocked me, as I had never
I remember the little things that mean so much to me. Like how one person once called me by my middle name. Told me that
by Sylvester Pierpoint (aka John Jeffries)
MOTHER-IN-LAW - One of my happy memories is that of my wife's mother. Some people complain and make jokes about their mother-in-law
by Jane Prinsep
The little beach at Villeneuve is a shallow-sloping, pebbly crescent, fringed with weeping willows and embracing the now-glittering
View All Articles on: Reflections: Memories
Featured Partner
Takes All Types has partnered with Helium, giving you the chance to write for a cause. Browse Takes All Types' featured titles, pick an issue and write! You can also donate your article earnings. Share what you know, learn...more